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Hello. I am new to critiquing, so don't judge me for my thoughts. Anyway here's what I think: general appearance: The picture isn't any...


I see little need for critiquing here. the pose seems fine as if it were intentionally awkward. the colors seem fine, not too jarring o...

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basic sketch
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Artist | Student | Varied
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Mainly known as KuudereChef
just a kid from Brooklyn who's trying their hand at art
I'm 15 so don't be *too* cruel

I'll post art every now and then if I feel like it

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Hello. I am new to critiquing, so don't judge me for my thoughts. Anyway here's what I think:
general appearance: The picture isn't anything particularly new or original in concept or execution, though that doesn't particularly matter; it's a simple, short, and sweet picture
anatomy of character: the general anatomy could use some work. I would suggest using a reference for the character's specific body type to help. the anthro elements of the character seem to be spot-on
coloring and shading: the coloring for the background is rather nice. it uses more subtle colors and changes and seems to blend together rather well. the colors for the character, however, could use some work. the colors for the ears and flowers are rather extreme and don't look nice to the eyes.
Line art: the line art is the thing I dislike the most about this piece. it's well... it looks like it was drawn with the mouse. that's all I have to say on that matter.

that's enough of my ranting. goodbye.
I see little need for critiquing here. the pose seems fine as if it were intentionally awkward. the colors seem fine, not too jarring or extreme on the eyes. the shoulders are my only real main concern with this piece. They seem uneven, and even if they weren't, they seem odd, as if they weren't joints on top of the torso, but rather the weird seamless start to the arms. also her left arm (her perspective) is kinda fat and lazily done (forgive me for that). also there seems to be a continuity error with the arm and shirt, as based of the other side, the shirt is sleeveless and would thus have the arm displayed above it.
that is all
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CrystalCircle Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the watch! :D
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1MoreArtist Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2017  Student General Artist
np
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SushimiTsukimi Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much for the watch! It means a lot <3
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1MoreArtist Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2017  Student General Artist
np
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Isimura Featured By Owner May 10, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the watch!
Have a nice day <3
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1MoreArtist Featured By Owner May 11, 2017  Student General Artist
no problem
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PlagueAliki Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017
thank you for watching♡( *¯ㅿ¯*)
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1MoreArtist Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017  Student General Artist
No problem. I watch anyone who makes cool art
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1MoreArtist Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2017  Student General Artist
I should start actually using this account more often
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Mofojuju Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Student General Artist
thank you so much for the watch! i see we're both 15!
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